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Post by Suzy on Apr 5, 2014 5:51:30 GMT -5
I think it was Daniel who posted a link to it. I was sure I had bookmarked it but now I can't find it...  Could we have it again, please? |
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Post by Pru Freda on Apr 5, 2014 6:42:36 GMT -5
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Post by Suzy on Apr 5, 2014 6:46:24 GMT -5
I think that was it! Thank you, Lynda!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2014 7:34:39 GMT -5
In the article, this is my takeaway:
"5) Senses. Use them all. But here’s a key: notice only what your character would notice. If your hero is color blind, there’s no reason to describe the sparkling blue of the heroine’s eyes. He can’t see that. He can see her lush hips, tilted chin…etc. And smell her natural lilac scent."
I'll add this point to my editing checklist.
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Post by Suzy on Apr 13, 2014 7:40:23 GMT -5
Brilliant article, isn't it?
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